Valignatir Malsvir

[Valignatir Malsvir]

Character name: Valignatir Malsvir, "The Burning Evil"
Race: Dragon, sub-species unknown.
Age: 60; As some dragons go, Valignatir Malsvir held himself in his eggshell prison for fifty-five years, learning by listening, and struggling to maintain enough room to stay within his sanctuary. He broke forth only five years ago, which would be his 'age' to those around him.
Gender: Male

Appearance: A tiny little thing this being is; a quadruped, Valignatir Malsvir stands a mere four-feet-six-inches. Lengthwise, he is a long thirteen-feet-six-inches, triple that of his height. He is only one-hundred and ten pounds, his slightly attenuated body a conformation of starvation. His wingspan is approximately twenty-seven feet long, double that of his length, although they are no more that leathery decorations for the time being. His pupils are split vertically as a felines, with a tendency to dilate when something catches his attention. His irises are a crimson color and, like a flame, grow orange and then yellow next to the pupils. His scales are rough and shoddy from lack of daily grooming, and are an ashen gray rather than the polished obsidian they should be. Wicked spines curve their way down his back and onto his tail, and are coal colored, although an almost violet tint is seen to them in direct sunlight. Two rows of razor edged teeth line his jaws, perpetually cracked opened to allow a serpentine tongue to slip from the moist orifice. Three sets of horns adorn his head, the middle being the sharpest and the lengthiest by far, whilst the other two on either side are a bit duller. The longest of the set of horns has begun a curve, almost to faint to judge. Valignatir Malsvir's claws are sharpened from constant use, and are cleaned by him on a regular basis, giving them a glossy sheen.

Abilities

- Fire: Valignatir Malsvir has no fire-breathing characteristics as of yet; Fire is considered a magick, and he is nowhere near age for that. Instead, he releases scorching heat waves through a gaping maw. Though this defense mechanism doesn't travel very far, it deters most foes foolish enough to approach from the front.

- Tooth, Tail, and Claw: Valignatir Malsvir's primary weaponry. His teeth and claws are easily able to slice through biomass, and can cause heavy dents to some metals. Rather than dulling, his claws seem to sharpen with constant use. His tail is whip-like and fast, and spines have grown flat on either side, making for an almost double-edged sword appearance.



NOTE: THESE ARE BRIEF SCHEMATICS FOR A FLEDGLING. I MAY JUMP HUNDREDS OF YEARS IN THE FUTURE AGE-WISE DEPENDING ON THE STORY. ANY COMPLAINTS ARE WELCOME AND SHOULD BE ADDRESSED IN MY MAILBOX. I WILL TRY TO WRITE SHEETS FOR AGES I MAY END UP USING AND POST THEM HERE AS WELL.

[Saruna]

Hi there and welcome to Thar!

Before we process your app I would ask that you take a peek at the new character guide and the character creation section of rules to get a good idea of the sorts of things we look for in apps. Additionally you can look at approved apps to get a good feel. Right now your app doesn't have enough information and could use a tweaking to hit the format we ask applicants to use. Format might seem like a silly thing to require, but it helps ensure that we can balance the character before approval and also that future rp buddies will be able to get a good idea of who the character is by reading through the app.

Here are some good examples of approved characters:

Vincent
Jackal
Tanya
Darrik

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