Vse Torm

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Vse Torm

Post by luke6080 » Sun Jan 17, 2010 8:58 pm

Name: Vse Torm
Gender: Male
Height: 5'10"
Weight: 156 pounds
Age: 26
Race: Human


Physical Appearance: Very skinny and kind of short. He has sharp and attractive features.
He is missing a part of his ear from a bear

Possessions: Short sword, long bow, quiver of arrows, brown and green leather armor, and his horse, Mayhem.

Strengths/Good Qualities: Agile, limber, a good shot with a bow, sneaky, very good with women, and has a knowledge of the seedy parts of this country


Weaknesses/Bad Qualities: Not strong, only proficient with his sword, knows nothing about the upper class, very selfish, has a hard time keeping a relationship afloat, and has a hate for most people.

History- Vse was left in the northern woods by his mother who was to poor to take care of him. He was found by elves, and saved by them. He quickly learned to take care of himself, for no elf truly cared about him. He quickly became hard hearted, and left the elven settlement as soon as he could.

The next many years of his life was spent exploring the wilderness. He learned to find roots to eat, how to kill many ferocious beasts, and how to tend to his wounds. He just recently returned to civilization and is attempting to find his mother... to kill her.

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Re: Vse Torm

Post by Niabi » Sun Jan 17, 2010 10:15 pm

Is this even a real character application? This is way too short, plus it's just lacking everything and everywhere. Take a look at some of the accepted characters.

On top of that, we couldn't even consider this for approval because your username goes against our rules, go back and read them and start over.
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