Etain Awmonin

[Anonymous]

Name: Etain Awmonin
Age: 25
Gender: Female
Race: human, Dark Fey (but she is thinks she's human)

Eyes: dark smoky eyes
Hair: dark green, messy unevenly long.
Ht.: 4"8
Wt.: 100lbs

Physical Appearance:

Short and slender, Etain is a pretty female who is very friendly, shy and down to earth. Her body is attractive and slightly muscular, but she looks frail. She does not’t look threatening at all and always seemed to shy away from making eye contact with people. Her clothes are pretty simple with black leather pants and boots, with a lacy black corset. She always wears a heavy hooded cloak to hide herself. She is scared of being touch but on rare occasions, she will reach out. She has a dagger hidden in her boot and always has 3-inch needles tucked away on her person. She has yet to learn more fighting skills and does not’t really fight much. She tend to hide or try to talk out of fighting, afraid her unstable power will unleash.

Her face is a round childish looking face with pouting lips. She does not’t wear any sort of cosmetics and let her messy dark greenish black hair fall unevenly about her face. She wears a lot of silver necklaces and bracelets with hoops littered about her ears. She has a silver hoop in the middle of her bottom lip.

History:

Etain grew up in a small farm in Shim. She had a quiet and peaceful life as a girl growing up on the farm. Her mother, Tyralia and mother’s brother, Fyren, raised her well and despite their hardships with money, they always seem to get by and enjoy life However, they were quite suspicious of strangers. The neighboring farms always seemed to frown upon Etain’s mother for an odd reason. Etain was not’t aware of the reason and still remains oblivious as to why. One day when she turned 13, Fyren and her mother were sad and worried for her well being.

Fyren had to tell her that people shunned them because of her father, Ke’r Awmonin held a power that was in his bloodline for generations. It was the power to provoke fear upon someone and actually could cause their death. It takes a lot of training to master and control it. Fyren also spoke of her bloodline coming from Dark Fey who made people afraid of the dark. Fyren did not know much on it but Etain’s father did. Sadly, her father disappeared and presumed dead for many years. He was not well liked so it was possible he was murdered.

Etain refused to believe this because she thought it was just a story to make her stop wondering about her father. From hearing that, she grew up bitter and wanted to leave home and explore the world. She learned minor combat with needles and still loved her family. Etain was unhappy because she got 'looks' from her mother and uncle. When she turned 16, she never thought her life would change in a full circle. Etain was sick on the morning she turned 16 and her mother tried hard to heal her. However, her fever rose incredibly high. At one point, Fyren took the workhorse and hurried to get a healer or someone with stronger herbs. Etain’s mother unfortunately witnessed Etain’s terrifying power. Etain felt much better and did not know what she was doing until she sat up with her mother screaming and hyperventilating on the floor. Etain did not know her eyes changed from a soft brown to smoky silver color and tried to help her mother but her mother died with a terrified look on her face.

Fyren returned and saw Etain hysterically crying and tried to help but Etain took off in a run and never returned home. Etain lived on things from the forest as she soon controlled he fear provoking powers. She vowed not to use it again but unfortunately, throughout the years, she could not control it. When she is very upset or fearful for her life, and someone makes eye contact with her, she’d uncontrollably unleash his or her deepest fear.
She is a wanderer due to this, learning to steal a little bit only to survive. Currently she is lonely and wants help on her powers she calls a curse.

Powers:

Provoke/ cause fear: By eye contact or touch, she can make someone think his or her deepest fear is real, causing them to either faint, have a nervous breakdown or die if their fear is extreme**

**Note: I want it to be clear that I will not kill a character, especially player characters, without their permission. I understand the rules...I have role played free form before. Thanks.

Illusion: can make the fear seem so real that nothing else is real

Good at range combat with throwing weapons (ie: needles) poor at close combat without use of her powers.

Weakness:

Can’t control her powers when her emotions are high.


I have edited this bio, finally...lol I hope this is satisfactory.

[Frug]

Okay, i've looked it over and there are only a few suggestions.

This line here:
"By the degree, she can make temporarily or to the extreme: a person dies from their fear. "

I don't understand it so you should reword it to make it more clear. Also there are a few typos in the history you should fix.

You should also know that you won't be killing any player characters with your powers unless they agree to it, but otherwise it looks alright.

[Anonymous]

Okay, i've looked it over and there are only a few suggestions.

This line here:
"By the degree, she can make temporarily or to the extreme: a person dies from their fear. "

I don't understand it so you should reword it to make it more clear. Also there are a few typos in the history you should fix.

You should also know that you won't be killing any player characters with your powers unless they agree to it, but otherwise it looks alright.

Hi Frug,

I'm sorry for taking so long. my stupid computer's hard drive crashed and finally getting things worked out.

I'm aware of not killing player characters. I was saying she could be capable of killing if pushed too far (i.e.: if a npc provokes her or make her emotions go over the edge, she is capable of killing. I didn't say I'll do it without permissions of players or npc .

I have edited my bio and hope it is better.

[Jenica Sabiny]

Wear your tough hide for this one. My sugar's all melted.

Please please please go through your bio and fix the typos. They're driving me insane. Insane I say!

Your character's a tad bit Mary Sue, but the history is detailed enough to pass. I do like that fact that rather than having the parents killed, she kills one herself. Not on purpose, but it's a start.

Please make sure to detail that her power can currently only arise when she is under deep duress. And I mean deep. And, as you know and seem willing to respect, she cannot kill another character without their consent. I don't see the harm in Stressed Out Dark Elf being able to touch someone with the Finger of Evil and Spite. She just can't incapacitate them for long.

Not yet.

[Jenica Sabiny]

A'ight, it'll do . I hope you're rarin' to play; go on, git!

I'll move it to accepted after you've made your first post.