Corey's adventures in trying to get his app approved on another website continue...
(17:48:36) Wulf: they'll ask for your characters fucking jawline description
(17:48:50) Kitan: Hehehe
(17:49:52) Farius_Masello: LOL
(17:50:22) Farius_Masello: "uhhhhh, masculine but still streamlined, like a 6.85/10 on the manliness scale
(17:50:24) Farius_Masello: "
(17:50:49) Wulf: we're not joking.
(17:51:02) Wulf: This was a serious critique on my character app.
(17:51:23) Wulf: and that I have two grammatically incomplete sentences in my history.
(17:52:53) Farius_Masello: ...
(17:54:57) Wulf: since you missed it
(17:54:59) Wulf: 2) For his appearance there should be more description of his facial features (nose, eye shape, mouth, jaw line)
3) The first two sentences in your history section are incomplete grammatically.
(17:56:41) Kitan: Look at what high standards they have, my goodness, maybe we need to step ours up a notch
(17:57:07) Farius_Masello:
(17:57:07) Kitan: Jason, start asking newbies for a molecule count for their characters
(17:57:21) Katona: Good idea.
(17:57:27) Katona: And you have to update it as it changes.
(17:57:31) Wulf: "You have to draw a thumbprint for your character that has to be unique"
(17:57:34) Katona: At the start and end of each post.
(17:57:37) Katona: And also in the app.
(17:57:38) Farius_Masello: "Yeah, going to need a number, in moles, rounded to 5 significant figures, please"
(17:57:40) Kitan: Yeah!
(17:58:11) Wulf: "this man you mentioned, we're going to need a date of birth and description for him"
"But he's just a background character"
"Your point?"
(17:58:14) Katona: Not just a thumbprint, all the fingers!
(17:58:19) Katona: Including scars!
(17:58:35) Wulf: I provided ages for my characters family and then they required me to provide birth years for the app
(17:58:45) Farius_Masello: And a pore-mapping of the entire face and neck area
(17:58:55) Katona: A list of the details and descriptions of all characters you character has ever met in their life, just so we can make sure that we know if they'll recognize someone.
(17:59:41) Katona: Including people they passed on the street.
(17:59:48) Farius_Masello: And a genetic deconstruction of their entire DNA chain to make sure the physical description is correct, as well as identifying diseases the character is predisposed to for potential plot devices
(17:59:55) Wulf: okay
(18:00:00) Katona: Absolutely.
(18:00:00) Wulf: I am going to try and reply.
(18:00:10) Katona: Good luck.
You'll find that the active characters here have been developed specifically for the setting
