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kirchhoff42

Voltaire the Phoenix

Post by kirchhoff42 » Mon Jul 19, 2010 10:43 am

Player Name: Kirchhoff42

Name: Voltaire

Age: 500

Race: Phoenix

Height: 1 metre

Weight: Im sorry but i have no idea

Physical Description: His feathers is bright orange, yellow and red. When the sun hits his feathers it looks like he is on fire. His feed are covered with black scales.

Possessions: He don't own anything.

Powers or Strengths: he can heat op the air and he can form a firebolt with his wings. he can also speak a few languages.

Weaknesses: if it's cold he is getting weaker and grumpy. he is also naive.

History: every 100 year or so he burst to flames and rise from the ashes (out of charecter: dont worry it's not gonna happen, it's just a fact about his past) and each time he can't remember anything from his past "life". He is traveling around and meeting (thats how he learned to speak).

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Saruna
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Re: Voltaire the Phoenix

Post by Saruna » Mon Jul 19, 2010 3:51 pm

Sorry guys, I called it first!
#biologicallyconscientious||Characters and threads.

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Re: Voltaire the Phoenix

Post by kirchhoff42 » Mon Jul 19, 2010 4:50 pm

what do you mean?

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Niabi
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Re: Voltaire the Phoenix

Post by Niabi » Mon Jul 19, 2010 5:53 pm

Saruna is saying that she wants to explain to you why we can't accept your character, but since she isn't on right now and I'm the person that usually handles apps, I'll explain it to you.

1. Your username goes against our rules. Go back and read them.

2. Our New Character Guide says not to make a character that is 500 years old or older unless you can explain what they have been doing in such a long life, I don't see that here.

3. Phoenix is not an acceptable race, they are too powerful.

4. Your physical description is very vague.

5. As far as strengths and weaknesses, he is unbalanced and overpowered.

6. Finally, and most importantly, your history is far too short.
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Re: Voltaire the Phoenix

Post by kirchhoff42 » Mon Jul 19, 2010 8:52 pm

two things:
1. i have read the rules but when i created my profile (and not Voltaire) i was tired. and can you change the username
2.just delete this post okay

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Frug
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Re: Voltaire the Phoenix

Post by Frug » Tue Jul 20, 2010 4:52 am

Saruna wrote:Sorry guys, I called it first!
Damn you.
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