Marion Reed

[Marion Reed]

Player Name: Margaret
Name: Marion Reed
Age: 20
Race: Human
Height: 5'6"
Weight: 120 lbs.
Physical Description: Marion has brown hair that usually falls in loose curls. She has light blue eyes and is somewhat pale. She has a scar over her left eyebrow. She typically wears a simple dress beneath a leather super tunic, along with boots that rise halfway up her calves. She wears leather gloves and often a hairband to keep her hair from falling into her face.
Possessions: Marion carries two weapons: a cutlass and a knife. She also carries a good luck charm around her neck, but it's not magical, just a pendant given to her by her sister.
Powers or Strengths: Marion does not possess magic, but she's quite skilled with the cutlass as well as hand-to-hand combat. She's studying to become strong with knife-throwing, which is why she carries the knife, but it's still a very new skill and she mostly misses.
Weaknesses: Knife throwing, signing on for more than she can reasonably handle (e.g. if someone needs help, even if it is beyond her means, she will vow to do what she can, even if it means getting others to help as well).
History: Marion Reed and her twin Saryn were orphaned ten years ago. Saryn is still alive, but Marion set out from home at the age of fifteen to seek adventure, while Saryn preferred to stay home. Marion still visits Saryn, though not for long as she and Saryn's husband, Dale, do not get along. Dale tried to kill her the last time she visited, two years ago, and she came away with her scar when he tried to strike at her eye. Since then, Marion vowed to become a stronger fighter, so that she can destroy Dale, whom she caught being unfaithful to Saryn (hence the fight between Marion and Dale). Though she is trained in hand-to-hand combat and can use a sword, Marion has difficult with close combat as she has a small frame and larger opponents make it difficult for her to get close or assert much force.
She and Saryn were raised by her aunt and uncle, whom she visits with great regularity, but as her aunt practices magic, Marion visits them in secret to help protect her aunt's practices. Marion's uncle wants her to marry and settle down, and both worry consistently about her well-being, traveling the world, for the most part up until now, by herself. Marion does tend to be a little stubborn, which has influenced her past decisions, including her choice to venture out on her own.

[Niabi]

You need to put some spaces in this and it could use some more time and love put into it. This character could use some fleshing out.