What crawled up your ass? I'm asking for cogent advice on what to include, but your pansy ass has to come and comment in a way that is extremely insulting and demeaning. I read the rules, how dare you insult my intelligence, when you cannot even offer a single bit of advice that can help me improve ...

Well that's nice and detailed a comment, isn't it? Explain what is wrong with it (other than the size of the history paragraph, I'm still working on it)

Name: Kuhl
Age: Exists beyond time, but first seen nearly 5000 years ago
Race: Djinn
Height: Inconstant height, normally around 6'4'' to 6'8''
Weight: Takes on a weightless form, however can be whatever weight desired

Physical Description: Kuhl is a Djinn, making him one of the last Old Immortals ...