Hey I am glad you pointed all these things out. I knew when I wrote the bio it was not going to be super fleshed out because I was tired, so I am going to revise it tonight. Thanks for the critic, I really appreciate it.

( Writers Note: This is my first time, so be gentle :)

Name: Marax Foray ( Originally Jasper Foray )

Age: 26

Race: Human

Physical Description:

Marax has a very pale complexion due to being in the dark so often. His skin is chalky and to say he was not attractive would be an ...