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Player Name: Chris -The Brutal Scribe

Name: Telteron Ogarthe

Age:22

Race:Human

Height:6'2"

Weight:205lb

Physical Description: Telteron would commonly be seen wearing black or dark clothing, usually topped off by a black, billowing cloak. He is bald and his head is exceptionally accented by a ...