kill my account and topic, Im done here, you are all to strict and quite annoying. Sorry Rotiku, that is if you are still here, but I hate this place. It could have been fun, but the mods are brining it down. Sorry again to all he members, if you want to blame someone...blame Sir Karsmir. For some ...

Thank you, all karsmir said was it was wrong and to powerful. How could I know what to fix when he didnt tell me?! Ill edit it today, but not at the moment.

Im sorry, but you have got to be kidding me! I also added to the history, and havent you ever heard of an extrordinary kid who accomplished many feats? Im not trying to be a super powered kid, but think about it this way, if you are trained for 11 years to swordfight you should be good! I mean no ...

I edited it, is it good enough now

I added the breaks, but where is the spell check button? I fixed all typos i could without it, for some reason i cant spell scince right...

Is that better?please inform me of anything i did wrong, thanks.

Player Name:Adurin
Character Name:Adurin
Age:15
Race:elf/ human mix
Height:5' 6''
Weight:174 lbs.

Physical description:Adurin is a young half-elf, however he can weild a sword and dagger with ease.His pitch black hair covers the whole back of his head and his forehead in front, then some longer ...