Added paragraph after Shylah's history about her condition being exacerbated by Cyric.

Added ~500-600 words, added quite a bit on personality, now both characters are much more fleshed out.

Wow. Didn't even realize that last one was on Jerial.

Edited. Put much more detail into Shylah and came up with the idea of Cyric having both eidetic memory and PTSD, a bad combo.

I'm going to go ahead and be done for now, so go ahead and see what's wrong.

So here goes:

Player Name- Ryan (Jerial)

((Just as a note, I will probably use just this account for both characters))

Gáethán Cyric gall-óglaigh

Age- 34
Race- Human (carries stag-shifter genes from an ancestor, but does not have the powers himself)
Height- 6'4''
Weight- ~180
Eye Color- Green ...