shameless self bump for a review...

ok fixed the weaknesses and strengths, and also i think i tackled the daemon/soul thing. i got rid of the soul things, wasn’t important anyway, also tried to better explain the possession, best example i can think of at the moment is like a mixed drink, two things one glass.

I’m thinking about doing the final tweaks on this soon, just wondering if I can get a quick read through to see if i need to make any changes, I’m pretty sure i can do more with the strengths and weaknesses, though I’m not sure what.

i will dont worry, im just chipping away at it currently

Name: Rayne/ Lilitu Baroness of Daemons
Age: 16/???
Race: Human/Daemon
Physical Description: Rayne stands about 5’3 and is of average build for a girl her age. She has fair alabaster skin, soft features, large bright green eyes that are framed by her short hair which is a dark red with streaks of ...