Murmurings at Los Malecón
Posted: Mon Feb 22, 2016 9:26 am
Cristobal's pen scratched across the paper as he made permanent his thoughts in neat cramped rows. Writing helped calm his nerves, and they certainly needed calming at the present.
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"There are circumstances in a man's life when he must needs take control of a situation, no matter the opposition, and set sail against the prevailing winds."
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No, too pompous, too much like the ancient greek orators. He was a modern gentleman of commerce, and it wouldn't do to so egregiously pretend to an artist's touch. He could only ascribe the momentary slip to his growing sense of unease. Recalling his past few days, Cristobal had to concede once more that his sister had kept odd company.
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"I followed my sister to Qadis. I had correctly assumed that would be her initial port of call after disdaining her home in favour of the dubious freedom of her illicit lover's arms. She had once introduced me to Gonzalo, one of her favoured city friends, an individual of dubious merit yet who was wealthy enough to own a large house. My visit to him did little to appease my suspicions of his criminal nature."
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All in all, Cristobal mused, a greasy little weasel with too much in the way of good looks and reeking of strange southern incense. Just the kind of exotic ruffian his sister had always found so entertaining. A real friend, he posited with a disgruntled harrumph to nobody in particular, wouldn't have so boldly suggested compensation for the information a worried brother sought. But that was the average resident of Qadis for you.
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"After some negotiation, Gonzalo grudgingly shared that Ysabel had mentioned she'd be calling upon another old friend for a favour, some merchant's son named Janucho who'd left Qadis as the result of a scandal. As to what kind of scandal that might have been, Gonzalo was not at all forthcoming. I took my leave, as it was clear I'd get no more from the tight-lipped miscreant, and made my way for the town of Arboleas."
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Arboleas didn't have a lot going for it, in Cristobal's opinion. It had a lot of orchards, thus the name, but that had given no hint as to what possible favour Ysabel could call upon from the disgraced son of a fruit merchant.
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"When I arrived in Arboleas I forwarded my credentials to the country estate of Garcia Luys Natalez De Arboleas, Janucho's father, explaining that I sought an audience with his son. I was forced to spend an unpleasant night in a barely adequate inn when the estate failed to reply with any kind of hospitable promptness. The sun had begun its descent the following day when a most grudging invitation arrived in the hands of an incredibly surly footman. If I'd thought Gonzalo was tight-lipped, the footman made the weasel look positively verbose. I will say little of my dealings with Janucho's ill-tempered senior, nor of the wretched Janucho himself - if only for Ysabel's sake. But I was given a destination, if only to sooner rid them of my presence, a distant village named Los Malecón."
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Cristobal grimaced as he recalled the vine-shackled manor house hunched resentfully among the densely planted orchards. Garcia Luys Natalez De Arboleas had kept a suspicious stare locked on the travelling nobleman throughout their entire interview. In hindsight that, coupled with Janucho's furtive and elusive gaze, was cause to send a shiver down Cristobal's spine in the recollection.
The locals had been friendlier, and the hotel keeper had been able to tell Cristobal more regarding his next destination. So remote was the fishing village, thanks to the quirks of its surrounding geography, that its residents only ever seemed to leave on market days or when the Ducal tax agents were scheduled. Access to the village was either by a difficult winding trail or by hiring the services of a fisherman's boat from one of the jetties south of the town of Mojácar.
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"I continued my search for Ysabel at the small farming village of Chirivel nearest to the start of the Los Malecón trail. The residents of Chirivel were that strange breed of hereditary peasant, whose busy livelihoods meant such that the vast majority of them never travelled further than a day from their homes. They were an unfriendly lot, perhaps put off by my finery, yet I sensed more than general hard-headed reticence when I raised the topic of the fishing village which Ysabel and her paramour had set out for.
Only a bribe was able to loosen the tongue of one of those thick-set farmers. I received the confirmation I needed: A man, child, and woman - the latter matching the picture of Ysabel within my locket - had passed through. The farmer, as if some long-forgotten sense of obligation had stirred in his dour breast, gruffly warned me away from Los Malecón. Though he wouldn't say why, his obvious discomfort on broaching the topic was alone enough to cause my stomach to churn with worry for my sister. Rather than set forth on the trail immediately, I made for Mojácar, where she would undoubtedly pass through upon leaving the fishing village."
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Cristobal sighed. Mojácar had been a waste of time of the worst variety. None of the fisherfolk there had seen Ysabel and, in a most aggravating and stubborn fashion, had refused him the courtesy of a boat ride to Los Malecón. Even when presented with the prospect of a substantial amount of money, the nobleman had been told with infuriating intractability that the waters were unsafe. Days wasted thanks to their stiff-necked unhelpfulness. Instead, he'd had to purchase the kind of necessary supplies for the two day hike he'd need to undertake from Chirivel to reach the village.
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"Mojácar was a dead end but the very fact Ysabel had not been seen there, I was assured, meant she most undoubtedly yet remained in Los Malecón. It was a glimmer of hope that I'd at least succeed in the first part of my difficult task: finding her. After that I'd still need to persuade her away from her currently foolish course of action, but I could cross that bridge as I came to it. I returned to Chirivel with pack, a treated canvas sleeping sack, fire-lighting equipment, and a week's supplies of dried food in case I somehow lost my way.
It had been a long time since I'd needed to carry such weight on my own shoulders in such a literal fashion, but the residents of Chirivel assured me that there'd be no taking my horse into the rough and mountainous terrain which shielded Los Malecón from outside interference. I entrusted Gertrude to the village with coin and made them promise to send word to the nearest branch of the Ducal militia if I was gone for over a fortnight. I knew Ysabel all too well and that, if I hadn't convinced her in the space of a week, I would have to bid her one final adieu and leave her to whatever her new life was. What I didn't know was the temperament of her paramour, so I left a note in Gertrude's saddlebags should the worst occur to me."
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Just writing about preparations for the hike in brief was enough to remind Cristobal of just how sore, tired, and hungry he was. Let alone how frayed his nerves were. Trail rations were no replacement for a good hot meal, and water was a dull drink to rely upon.
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"The hike took closer to three days, as the weight of my gear slowed my pace. I can only assume it was a fitter and stronger man who set the benchmark the farmers had quoted me. Perhaps I was over-sensitive, due to being in unfamiliar wilderness, but I felt as if I were being watched from every shadow. At night, I could swear the sounds I heard were not from regular birds nor beasts, so disconcerting and unnatural they seemed. But I have oft been told that the animals of the wild cannot be presumed to sound in a particular way. I kept to my fire, and kept my sword drawn and close to hand. What sleep I had was light and fitful, thanks in part to discomfort, and to the startling effect of the night's chorus."
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Cristobal took a deep breath, and slightly regretted it. He didn't like the taste of the ocean air in this place, but he couldn't say quite what was wrong with it.
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"I have reached my destination, and yet I find myself overcome with a strange reticence to enter the village. I can hear the distant flap of canvas, the creak of wood, and hints of what I assume are the locals in conversation carried on the breeze. But the air doesn't feel quite clean, in a way I can in no rational way justify, and my every instinct tells me to go home. But these are nerves, I am certain, as I undoubtedly am fearing the possibility that Ysabel may refuse my aid, refuse to return with me. I fear that more than anything else. But if I don't act, such an outcome would be inevitable. And so I shall finish this section here, steel my nerves, and finish my journey."
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Cristobal put away his pen and journal carefully. He didn't need a mirror to know he cut a less-than-dapper figure at this time, and imagined he showed every sign of having endured a three-day hike. Gritting his teeth Cristobal made his way to the end of the trail, where it wound rocky and jagged into a opening above a large and isolated cove. He cast his gaze around the inlet, noting the intimidating arms of the tall reefs which embraced a large part of it. Finally, he settled his gaze on the village of Los Malecón itself. With perhaps only another half hour to hour left before he reached his destination, Cristobal carefully picked his way down from the trail's cliff-side entrance and in the direction of the shore-side salt-encrusted buildings he'd spotted from the cliff-side.
~
"There are circumstances in a man's life when he must needs take control of a situation, no matter the opposition, and set sail against the prevailing winds."
~
No, too pompous, too much like the ancient greek orators. He was a modern gentleman of commerce, and it wouldn't do to so egregiously pretend to an artist's touch. He could only ascribe the momentary slip to his growing sense of unease. Recalling his past few days, Cristobal had to concede once more that his sister had kept odd company.
~
"I followed my sister to Qadis. I had correctly assumed that would be her initial port of call after disdaining her home in favour of the dubious freedom of her illicit lover's arms. She had once introduced me to Gonzalo, one of her favoured city friends, an individual of dubious merit yet who was wealthy enough to own a large house. My visit to him did little to appease my suspicions of his criminal nature."
~
All in all, Cristobal mused, a greasy little weasel with too much in the way of good looks and reeking of strange southern incense. Just the kind of exotic ruffian his sister had always found so entertaining. A real friend, he posited with a disgruntled harrumph to nobody in particular, wouldn't have so boldly suggested compensation for the information a worried brother sought. But that was the average resident of Qadis for you.
~
"After some negotiation, Gonzalo grudgingly shared that Ysabel had mentioned she'd be calling upon another old friend for a favour, some merchant's son named Janucho who'd left Qadis as the result of a scandal. As to what kind of scandal that might have been, Gonzalo was not at all forthcoming. I took my leave, as it was clear I'd get no more from the tight-lipped miscreant, and made my way for the town of Arboleas."
~
Arboleas didn't have a lot going for it, in Cristobal's opinion. It had a lot of orchards, thus the name, but that had given no hint as to what possible favour Ysabel could call upon from the disgraced son of a fruit merchant.
~
"When I arrived in Arboleas I forwarded my credentials to the country estate of Garcia Luys Natalez De Arboleas, Janucho's father, explaining that I sought an audience with his son. I was forced to spend an unpleasant night in a barely adequate inn when the estate failed to reply with any kind of hospitable promptness. The sun had begun its descent the following day when a most grudging invitation arrived in the hands of an incredibly surly footman. If I'd thought Gonzalo was tight-lipped, the footman made the weasel look positively verbose. I will say little of my dealings with Janucho's ill-tempered senior, nor of the wretched Janucho himself - if only for Ysabel's sake. But I was given a destination, if only to sooner rid them of my presence, a distant village named Los Malecón."
~
Cristobal grimaced as he recalled the vine-shackled manor house hunched resentfully among the densely planted orchards. Garcia Luys Natalez De Arboleas had kept a suspicious stare locked on the travelling nobleman throughout their entire interview. In hindsight that, coupled with Janucho's furtive and elusive gaze, was cause to send a shiver down Cristobal's spine in the recollection.
The locals had been friendlier, and the hotel keeper had been able to tell Cristobal more regarding his next destination. So remote was the fishing village, thanks to the quirks of its surrounding geography, that its residents only ever seemed to leave on market days or when the Ducal tax agents were scheduled. Access to the village was either by a difficult winding trail or by hiring the services of a fisherman's boat from one of the jetties south of the town of Mojácar.
~
"I continued my search for Ysabel at the small farming village of Chirivel nearest to the start of the Los Malecón trail. The residents of Chirivel were that strange breed of hereditary peasant, whose busy livelihoods meant such that the vast majority of them never travelled further than a day from their homes. They were an unfriendly lot, perhaps put off by my finery, yet I sensed more than general hard-headed reticence when I raised the topic of the fishing village which Ysabel and her paramour had set out for.
Only a bribe was able to loosen the tongue of one of those thick-set farmers. I received the confirmation I needed: A man, child, and woman - the latter matching the picture of Ysabel within my locket - had passed through. The farmer, as if some long-forgotten sense of obligation had stirred in his dour breast, gruffly warned me away from Los Malecón. Though he wouldn't say why, his obvious discomfort on broaching the topic was alone enough to cause my stomach to churn with worry for my sister. Rather than set forth on the trail immediately, I made for Mojácar, where she would undoubtedly pass through upon leaving the fishing village."
~
Cristobal sighed. Mojácar had been a waste of time of the worst variety. None of the fisherfolk there had seen Ysabel and, in a most aggravating and stubborn fashion, had refused him the courtesy of a boat ride to Los Malecón. Even when presented with the prospect of a substantial amount of money, the nobleman had been told with infuriating intractability that the waters were unsafe. Days wasted thanks to their stiff-necked unhelpfulness. Instead, he'd had to purchase the kind of necessary supplies for the two day hike he'd need to undertake from Chirivel to reach the village.
~
"Mojácar was a dead end but the very fact Ysabel had not been seen there, I was assured, meant she most undoubtedly yet remained in Los Malecón. It was a glimmer of hope that I'd at least succeed in the first part of my difficult task: finding her. After that I'd still need to persuade her away from her currently foolish course of action, but I could cross that bridge as I came to it. I returned to Chirivel with pack, a treated canvas sleeping sack, fire-lighting equipment, and a week's supplies of dried food in case I somehow lost my way.
It had been a long time since I'd needed to carry such weight on my own shoulders in such a literal fashion, but the residents of Chirivel assured me that there'd be no taking my horse into the rough and mountainous terrain which shielded Los Malecón from outside interference. I entrusted Gertrude to the village with coin and made them promise to send word to the nearest branch of the Ducal militia if I was gone for over a fortnight. I knew Ysabel all too well and that, if I hadn't convinced her in the space of a week, I would have to bid her one final adieu and leave her to whatever her new life was. What I didn't know was the temperament of her paramour, so I left a note in Gertrude's saddlebags should the worst occur to me."
~
Just writing about preparations for the hike in brief was enough to remind Cristobal of just how sore, tired, and hungry he was. Let alone how frayed his nerves were. Trail rations were no replacement for a good hot meal, and water was a dull drink to rely upon.
~
"The hike took closer to three days, as the weight of my gear slowed my pace. I can only assume it was a fitter and stronger man who set the benchmark the farmers had quoted me. Perhaps I was over-sensitive, due to being in unfamiliar wilderness, but I felt as if I were being watched from every shadow. At night, I could swear the sounds I heard were not from regular birds nor beasts, so disconcerting and unnatural they seemed. But I have oft been told that the animals of the wild cannot be presumed to sound in a particular way. I kept to my fire, and kept my sword drawn and close to hand. What sleep I had was light and fitful, thanks in part to discomfort, and to the startling effect of the night's chorus."
~
Cristobal took a deep breath, and slightly regretted it. He didn't like the taste of the ocean air in this place, but he couldn't say quite what was wrong with it.
~
"I have reached my destination, and yet I find myself overcome with a strange reticence to enter the village. I can hear the distant flap of canvas, the creak of wood, and hints of what I assume are the locals in conversation carried on the breeze. But the air doesn't feel quite clean, in a way I can in no rational way justify, and my every instinct tells me to go home. But these are nerves, I am certain, as I undoubtedly am fearing the possibility that Ysabel may refuse my aid, refuse to return with me. I fear that more than anything else. But if I don't act, such an outcome would be inevitable. And so I shall finish this section here, steel my nerves, and finish my journey."
~
Cristobal put away his pen and journal carefully. He didn't need a mirror to know he cut a less-than-dapper figure at this time, and imagined he showed every sign of having endured a three-day hike. Gritting his teeth Cristobal made his way to the end of the trail, where it wound rocky and jagged into a opening above a large and isolated cove. He cast his gaze around the inlet, noting the intimidating arms of the tall reefs which embraced a large part of it. Finally, he settled his gaze on the village of Los Malecón itself. With perhaps only another half hour to hour left before he reached his destination, Cristobal carefully picked his way down from the trail's cliff-side entrance and in the direction of the shore-side salt-encrusted buildings he'd spotted from the cliff-side.