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Bird from the sky

Posted: Sat Mar 07, 2015 9:45 am
by Renee Raialagos
Availability: For a start it's closed. But if you have ideas about something to add to the plot you are welcome to post for discussion.

Posting Speed: Standard speed

Characters Involved: Renee, Miklos

Thread starting date: Spring122PW at after the gala bombings and the curfew decision.

Location: Renee's house/garden. The residential district.

Summary: Miklos tries to get an injured bird with a secret message out of Renee's garden, but Renee is a difficult obstacle.

Other Notes: My first thread here. I'm reading up and trying to get things as correct as I can, but please tell me if I need to edit something and I'll do it.

Re: Bird from the sky

Posted: Sat Apr 11, 2015 3:46 pm
by Renee Raialagos
Tov, I want to ask you what you think of the following options. I have several ideas for where to take things in my next post. What is possible/best in your way of thinking, and is there something that would be impossible ? Which direction would you like things to take right now?

1. Surprise happens, that can up the stakes radically when Renee shuts the door and keeps ("steals") Kamen
2. They go on debating a bit more; this can maybe up the stakes too, but likely not as much
3. Renee explains her bird troubles right away; this can open for things taking a somewhat more friendly turn

Also, this is only what I have on mind. You are maybe thinking of totally other things, so please add your opinions and ideas :)

Re: Bird from the sky

Posted: Thu Apr 16, 2015 4:37 am
by Miklos
I was thinking something like 1-2 more posts of debating, then perhaps something more friendly. Renee certainly has Mik's attention with her question about bird food - he's used to people in the city thinking of birds as pests.

But it's up to you too! I'm down with pretty much whatever. :)