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Edward Trollins

Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 5:56 pm
by Zekic
Player Name: Zekic
Name: Edward Trollins
Age: 20
Race: Human(Got some troll blood in his heritage)
Height: 201cm
Weight: 107kg
Physical Description: I am not good at describing face and profile picture fit's rather good. Edward is also rather big and muscular compared to usual humans, and his back is unusually straight for someone from commoner origins.

Clothes: Simple dirty farmer's clothes:brown tunic, and dark green pants.

Possessions:Rusted iron 2 Handed Sword/

Powers or Strengths:
Thanks to trollish blood running trough him, Edward got lesser version of usual trollish benefit's, he is strong, tough and his wound regenerates way more quickly then ordinary humans(yet way then pure troll tough, so this regeneration mostly doesn't aid him in fights).

Skilled with 2 Handed sword.

Kind and compassionate for those who have less then him.

At crucial(Mostly life threatening) moment's his mind block's off emotions entirely, and he act's very calmly, largely based on instinct's.




Weaknesses:


Tough fire is no more dangerous to Edward then to normal human, he is afraid of it however, sometimes may even panic in sight of fire.

Got anger issues especially when someone is insulting him.

Sometimes is paranoid that everyone want to take away something from him.

Carefully chooses friends, and it is hard for him to create stronger relationship.

His confidence in himself varies rapidly.

Complete inability to use magic.




History:Edward's grand, grand, grand father was a troll, and while it's unknown how exactly it happened, this fact was well known in Edward's home town. His family was harassed, and verbally bullied by most of the town, and they lived in an small distance of town, things like small robberies or broken things were commonplace and city watch never cared to investigate. However their family were good, strong and honest worker's that's what they were valued(tough most of employer's never admitted it) and the family managed to survive. The family learned to value small thing's in life, so they were close to nature. And manged to stay happy(which annoyed the hater's even more).

Edward was different from the family in the fact that he was ambitious and didn't like the way of life which society forced Trollins into.Also he was way more ruthless with insulter's and is known to beat and punish offender's quite a few times, for witch he himself had been punished by city watch in various ways.

Once traveler came to Trollins house asking for shelter, for a few night's. Trollin's being kind people they were, swiftly accepted, and soon traveler was fed and had a bed to sleep even if quality of both was lacking. During his stay Edward was more interested in him then everyone else, and listened to the stories of the traveler. Turn's out this Traveler was a arena fighter, famous for his 2 Handed sword skills, and it wasn't long before Edward asked traveler to teach Edward how to use 2 handed sword, and much to disapproval of family traveler agreed.

After week when traveler finally left, Edward had wooden 2 handed sword, and learned basic's of 2 handed sword fighting, skills he later honed the best he possibly could considering he didn't had anyone to train with.

Then came a day witch changed Edward's life forever: One bully from town named Andrew, decided that he gonna finally put an end to "troll abominations who plague the essence of town". Something he was bragging about for month's to his friend's but didn't do a thing, "soon, soon" he told to his friend's yet friends stopped believing him because he didn't fulfilling his promise, so he finally had to act. Andrew took his father's 2 Handed sword and rushed to Trollin's house, and first who he met was younger brother of Edward, Titus. Andrew swung sword at him immediately..

Andrew wasn't a skilled fighter, so he didn't manage kill Titus, all he was able to do was to cut deep wound in Tituse's right arm, yet Edward saw what happened,and rage filled his mind. Edward attacked Andrew with fists, quickly taking scared Andrew down. Then Edward picked up Andrew's sword, and without hesitation executed Andrew despite him begging for mercy ..

Edward had to run and he knew it, he took sword gathered all he could from home and escaped. While traveling he promised to himself that one day he will have actual power, and he will be able to punish those like Andrew without any repercussions, he felt no remorse for killing young man who threatened his brother, and he was actually happy that he got a reason to leave old,boring life.

Edward ended up in City of Marn and he made his goal to become a member of city watch.

Re: Edward Trollins

Posted: Tue Jan 29, 2013 6:26 pm
by Niabi
I'm really sorry, but I've read over this character and it has far too many spelling and grammar errors for us to accept it. I'm going to go out on a limb and guess or rather hope, that English is not your first language as much of the app has issues with sentence structure. If at some point in the future you would like to try again with a different character, I will be happy to look over it but for now I'm going to have to say that this site is not the place for you.

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