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Lady Moth

Posted: Fri Feb 06, 2009 1:17 am
by Khali
(I decided to change my Character Name... would I be able to get my Display name changed as well?)

Morthena Comalies
Lady Moth

[INDEX]
Status
Family
Appearance
Inventory
Personal
History
Relationships
Companion
Spell List

[STATUS]
Age: Twenty-Seven
Gender: Female
Species: Succubus / Human
Alignment: Evil
Profession: Assassin/Courtesan
Origin: The Underworld.

[APPEARANCE]
Body: A mysteriously beautiful woman, with the power to seduce any man or woman with the promise of false love. Her tall slender body is curved and shapely, although taunt with her constant training. In fit physical condition for her age and size she is graceful and her movements are like liquid. She is able to use her own body as temptation and weapon. Ample breasts and slender legs, her skin soft, smooth although tanned from her regular outdoors activity. Her hands are slender, petite and fingers long and stroking. However do not take this as a weakness for her hands are still weapons nonetheless. Her eyes are a stunning brown/gold, reflecting the light, reaching teasingly into your soul. Dark brunette hair falls in cascades of curls down her back. It reaches down to the small of her back, longer were it straightened. However it is usually left down her back, occasionally tied in a high ponytail when on the job. On her left arm, in dark brown ink, is a tattoo of a horned devil, wings sprouting from his back that run down the left side of her body and across the top of her back. A serpent body runs down her arm, coming forth from flames that reach down to her fingers. Nestled between and above her breasts is another tattoo, although not quite as intricate as the first. Her last tattoo can be found trailing down her right leg, an elaborate design of light and dark browns. More than several piercings cover her body from head to toe. On her left breast there are two barbells, down her right arm there are 14 more barbell peircings, holding together a design of chains and rings. Above her eye brow there are two more, and from each ear dangles 5 rings. A line of three barbells go up from her naval, much like the design above her breast. Her last piercing can be found in the middle of her forehead, another design less intricate that the one down her arm. Three more piercings trace down her spine to the small of her back. However these are not barbell piercings as the others, three small rings, the last one has a hanging teardrop pearl dangling from it. Clothing: Her wardrobe consists of simply made dresses that teasingly show off her body. These dresses are for casual wear only, usually when browsing a town or market place, or even just out for a walk. She has a pair of chaps on hand for riding as well as the appropriate jacket. She also owns a few pairs of trousers and bluses for exercise and other such activities. For parties and the like she owns several gowns of different attributes that accent different portions of her body, setting off her color and positive aspects. Various other outfits for her job as a courtesan can be found, although they are for the buyers’ eyes only. An outfit that clings to her body is used for her other job. Resting on her breasts it clings like a second skin of dark brown. Ending high on her hips it drops down to hang in two flaps in the front and back. She never wears shoes. Only boots for clients or riding.
Jewellery: White rings down her back, the last with a dangling teardrop pearl. Sliver barbells in her arms, breast, and above her eyebrow. One barbell on her breast has an oval shaped piece of silver hanging from it. Three plates of silver rest of her arm held in place by barbells. A silver chain connects the three of them, eventually breaking into three that connect to rings on her fingers. Another silver chain runs from her fingers to her thumb. From the first plate four separate chains loop around her arm, the fourth one longer than the other three, dangling from her arm. She wears rings on both hands and all fingers, all sliver. A piece of jewellery rests on her forehead, in the center, a long chain hangs from it leading to her earring. Her earrings are mere rings in her ear.

[INVENTORY]
Weapons: Trained in the arts of using her body that’s all she needs to kill a man. However she does carry chains for choking and two small daggers are on her person at all times, each one specially crafted. On one a woman is dancing naked, a serpent about her feet. On the other a man is singing, also naked, flames encompassing his body.
Armor: Her specially crafted dress is made of light material allowing her to move freely. Most of her protection comes from evasive action. However a small amount of magic is woven through the material acting as leather armor, while still allowing movement.
Magic Items: Working dress described above. A small pendant her mother gave her and one of the hellhound’s claws, used for creating poison.
Other Items: A small finger bone of every one of her victims, a bloody sack used to place the head as proof of death, assorted rings and barbells and a bag of herbs.
Spells: Dance of Death, Spirit of Wind, Call of Satan, Hell Hound, and Light.

[PERSONAL]
Personality: Outgoing to the point of being crude when it comes to speaking her mind. Nothing goes unsaid, even smart remarks or sexist comments. Willing to fight, and many times bringing it on herself, she enjoys tearing apart people when the mood suits her. Comfortable with herself and her own body, she’s very secure, knowing she is a beautiful woman as well as able to perform in ways that only become her. She’s trained in the arts of courtship and knows her place within high ranking society. She has high self control enabling her to fit in with any crowd she pleases. A quick learner with a way of being able to listen to what message a person is sending, rather than what their saying. She enjoys being alone, even in crowded places such as taverns she will often find a seat to herself and join where she deems interesting. She can feign being meek or in love. However she is a strong individual that isn’t afraid when others would cower. She hates virtue and merit, coming from hell herself. She is easily able to deceive but not easily fooled.
Traits: Quick learner, able to pick up on things easily. Confident attitude draws people towards her. Blunt way of telling it how it is.
Virtues: Patience, Steadfastness, Focus, Discretion, Determination, and Bravery.
Vices: Arrogance, Defiance, Disloyalty, Injustice, Recklessness, Untrustworthiness, and Wrath.
Flaws: The tendency to underestimate her opponents. Carelessness for others’ feelings and way of thinking. Intolerance for those that are beneath her (by her way of ranking). The lack of remorse and guilt when a wrong is committed. Her ruthlessness and cruelty towards others.

[HISTORY]
As told by Morthena.
Unlike you’d expect I was subject to a perfectly normal childhood as I was growing up. I attended school daily, a privilege little were able to obtain in those days when most were poor. My town consisted of two extremes, the extremely wealthy or the extremely poor. I was one of those middle classes rarely seen and rarely noticed as anything at all. We were not worshipped nor looked down upon, we were merely there. My mother was very secretive, she would often joke to me about being a wife of Satan,
and one day I would be too. I took these comments in stride and avoided my mother as much as possible. My father was a glass blower, making the most wonderful things and shapes out of the molten glass. I would sit in his shop for hours on end watching the colors flow together. That was of course before I discovered books. I spent many hours in the fields bordering our town, atop the stone fence, reading and watching the wild ponies. Eventually I was sent off to a private school, which was where I learned to ride and dance. Although was I didn’t know was that the school was also a recruiting facility.
Sent through hell when I was merely fourteen was enough to scar any normal child, although I passed and moved on to train my body and soul for death. I became an assassin. Not only did my training include the art of killing, but also the art of the bedchamber. I am both Courtesan and Assassin. I was always told the bedchamber is the best way to catch them off their guard. I have found it true to this day. My training continued until I was seventeen, I did nothing but train up until that point, it was truly
not something every child would be willing to do. I happily accepted the fact that I was special and put forth my very being into becoming something that I had dreamed to be. Seventeen was my first assignment; I passed apparently, for his body is now ashes on the wind. By twenty I had moved up the ranks at alarming speed, and I was sent after a man named Ricciardo, accompanied by Mereliot. I was given a dagger and sent on my way. After three days I had finally found him, at a party it would seem and luck was with me. After a few glasses of wine I headed towards him, flirting and flouncing. Acting a fool; for men fall over themselves at opportunities such as those. I misjudged his abilities and he was much faster than I. Just as I was about to finish the deed he whipped around grasping my wrists in both hands…what ensued after that I will not say for even horrors such as those cannot be repeated. With a hard kiss on the mouth and a whispered good-bye he left me alone in the hotel room we had gotten for the night. Struggling free I whisked out of the door, just missing him leave with Mereliot. Cursing I looked for jobs elsewhere, having to stop when my son Siert was born. I hold no grudge against my son. Since then I have been doing my job, slowly tracking down Ricciardo. It was what brought me here to this realm. I know your wondering what may have happened to my family, friends, lovers, and the like. However they are long stories best left for other times. Perhaps, one day, I will tell you.

[RELATIONSHIPS]
Lovers
Enemies
Allies
Rivals
Partners
Friends
Family

Alcuin Montreve—First partner in the assassin business
(Deceased)
Barquiel de la Verreuil—First client of courtesan duties. Eventually developed.
Comtesse de Morena—Limitless supply of knowledge. Safe house.
Etaine L’Agnance—Mother (missing)
Haienth Corolean—Magic Practice partner.
Jacqueline D’Ange—First female lover. 7 months. (missing)
Janari Comalies—Father (deceased)
Jocelin Morhban—First love. Died by Morthena. (Deceased)
Mereliot—Partner of Ricciardo.
Moirethe Eglantine—Student of Mydel. Sworn to challenge when of age.
Mydel Roland—Teacher. Close friend.
Ricciardo—Father of Siert Comalies. Partner of Mereliot.
Sarial no Delans de Servte—Helped with financial aid when needed. Client.
Siert Comalies—Son of Ricciardo (deceased)

[COMPANION]
None Yet

[SPELL LIST] (If you want me to remove any spells I will do so)
Dance of Death
Summoned: Hand and body movements
Description: An offensive spell. It creates a maelstrom of souls, with some substance, that tear and rip at the opponent, and anything else in the area.
Energy used: A very draining spell. She is unable to cast again (a day or so) after this; sometimes it drains energy to the point of collapsing.
Spirit of Wind
Summoned: Hand and body movements
Description: A defensive spell. It creates a wall of wind, used to backlash any attack on the caster.
Energy used: A noticeable amount of energy is drained. Although it does not hinder performance at first.
Call of Satan
Summoned: Spoken—Hei’r Va’an Kai Motu’an
Description: Allows the user to speak to the creatures and demons dwelling In the underworld.
Energy used: A significant amount of energy is drained and it may take some time, sometimes a few hours, before she is able to cast again.
Hell Hound
Summoned: Spoken—Hosi’en Maui
Description: An offensive spell. Used to summon a demon dog made of blazing fire for one attack.
Energy used: A noticeable amount of energy is drained, however is easily and quickly recovered from.
Light
Summoned: Hand movement
Description: Creates an orbs of light that hovers over the caster’s shoulder, moving along with them.
Energy used: The drain is hardly noticeable since it is a well-used spell.

Re: Lady Moth

Posted: Sat Feb 07, 2009 9:15 am
by Frug
I'm sorry but it does not appear that you have put much into having this character fit with our setting or to conform with the standard layout for character profiles. I'm not one to nitpick about formatting, but it adds to the other aspects of this profile that don't fit.

Things like a listed alignment, mentioning of 'the underworld' which isn't part of our setting, listed flaws, virtues and vices (which I recognize as from WoD), and the nature and description of her spells all look as though this was taken from someplace else without being changed to fit this setting or our rules.

You should look at the other profiles here, the way they're laid out, and the way the spells are described with our magic system, and also read about our setting and adjust it so that she has a place on Pal Tahrenor.