Broken promises
Posted: Mon Jun 02, 2008 5:52 pm
This is an AR thread started with a vague purpose in mind. It will eventually wind up to that goal, which depicts an event which took place before Zebren came to Marn. Feel free to join in.
Smoke rose on the horizon, as the horn blared to signal the end of the day's toil. Black smoke, thick as anything Zebren had ever seen before, blotted out the stars and the moon behind it, the night sky camouflaging the smoke so as to hide it's origin.
Zebren sighed, and stretched out his arms, flinching immediately and regretting the action at once. The fresh welts brought to his back less than ten minutes previously shot pain signals all the way across his back, forcing him to arch it in reflex response, which in turn brought him more pain. Despite this, he bit his lip, made no sound. A trickle of blood ran down his chin from where he had bitten through the flesh, which he wiped away as his nineteen year old eyes filled with tears.
This was wrong, but he was used to it. Fifteen years of veritable torture had taught him that staying quiet, even whilst the adults threw lines of fire and screaming pain down his back. His lips were a multitude of scabs and scar tissue, open wounds and healing ones, from the amount of times he'd bitten through it. Still, it looked better than his back, which at the present time was dripping black Danteri blood down to splash tiny craters in the sand beneath him. The flesh hung off his bones, spine just visible as a series of bleach white dots amid the mess of black and pink his back had become.
He would have shrugged, but wisely refrained, resolving instead to set off home, towards where the smoke was coming from. He'd seen that kind of smoke before, the billowing blackness, the stuff that consumed the night and blotted out the moon. That was all that was left of someone's house; the dark of night prevented him from seeing which one most clearly. Still, it was an hour's trudge with a back in such poor condition as his. Walking was difficult with severed tendons and muscles hanging out of the cavity that once filled out his clothes.
Eventually, he reached the half-way mark, and stopped for a rest. Though it was night, the temperature was still outrageously high, which made walking all the more arduous. He had no water, nothing to drink or eat until he got home, another half an hour away, and he was longing for the solitude of his parent's hut, for that was all it was, really. Still, they had basic sanitation, which was the ditch and gully at the back, and someone cam round once a day to drop off a large vat of water off, and take the old one away. That water was meant to serve four people per house for bathing, cooking and drinking in the desert heat.
It failed. Just another of the government's broken promises.
Smoke rose on the horizon, as the horn blared to signal the end of the day's toil. Black smoke, thick as anything Zebren had ever seen before, blotted out the stars and the moon behind it, the night sky camouflaging the smoke so as to hide it's origin.
Zebren sighed, and stretched out his arms, flinching immediately and regretting the action at once. The fresh welts brought to his back less than ten minutes previously shot pain signals all the way across his back, forcing him to arch it in reflex response, which in turn brought him more pain. Despite this, he bit his lip, made no sound. A trickle of blood ran down his chin from where he had bitten through the flesh, which he wiped away as his nineteen year old eyes filled with tears.
This was wrong, but he was used to it. Fifteen years of veritable torture had taught him that staying quiet, even whilst the adults threw lines of fire and screaming pain down his back. His lips were a multitude of scabs and scar tissue, open wounds and healing ones, from the amount of times he'd bitten through it. Still, it looked better than his back, which at the present time was dripping black Danteri blood down to splash tiny craters in the sand beneath him. The flesh hung off his bones, spine just visible as a series of bleach white dots amid the mess of black and pink his back had become.
He would have shrugged, but wisely refrained, resolving instead to set off home, towards where the smoke was coming from. He'd seen that kind of smoke before, the billowing blackness, the stuff that consumed the night and blotted out the moon. That was all that was left of someone's house; the dark of night prevented him from seeing which one most clearly. Still, it was an hour's trudge with a back in such poor condition as his. Walking was difficult with severed tendons and muscles hanging out of the cavity that once filled out his clothes.
Eventually, he reached the half-way mark, and stopped for a rest. Though it was night, the temperature was still outrageously high, which made walking all the more arduous. He had no water, nothing to drink or eat until he got home, another half an hour away, and he was longing for the solitude of his parent's hut, for that was all it was, really. Still, they had basic sanitation, which was the ditch and gully at the back, and someone cam round once a day to drop off a large vat of water off, and take the old one away. That water was meant to serve four people per house for bathing, cooking and drinking in the desert heat.
It failed. Just another of the government's broken promises.