Thar Shaddin

Name: Vasher Lev

Age: 3000

Race: elf (sorta)

Height: 7'2''

Weight: 100


Physical Description:

-Hair: white

-Skin: pale

-Eyes: Soullfull black usualy but wen angry or otherly emotioned change color ie angry red sad blue etc. Esp when passionate flash color change with INTENSITY so grate it pulls in all who can see. Many who meet this gays find it imposibul to look away because of the grate INTENSITY.

-Clothes: Long flowin robes flow down too feet and flow around arms flowingly, fall from collar in flowing brown folds

-Overal: V. impossing to see, all who see are amazed at the pur sight of this man. (Basicly just look @ pic)


Posessions:

-Staff: Multiusefull weapon, long thin with snak around, can change into many things, incl:

SWORD: large sword, a legend with men and elfs alike, blade the size of a human man (a big 1) but sharp enough to cut threw pur diamond or other hard stone

-Lamp: Bright lite can shine threw any darkness, lite up any room. Also magickal lite brings hope to all who r weery.

-Cross Necklace: Banishes demons to whence they came from if Vasher chants "GO BACK TO WHENCE YOU CAME FROM!"


Powers or Strengths:

-Magick: V. magickal, can use posessions to fite and bring piece to many. Also has healing power.

-Strong: Strong enouf to lift bigest sword in Thar, strength is legendry. Can fite with hands even w/out magick.

-Kind: One of the kindest soulls you wil meat.

-Humbl: Taks a grate man to be humbl with such powr, Vasher, he does a grate man.


Weaknesses:

-To kind, wil help ppl even when puts him in dangr

-Hats evil, canot stand to be around – must fite if evil is neer.


History:

-0: Born recognised as special by elfs.

-1: Seldjys, king of elfs, give Vasher special posion.

-2: Vasher begins to speek, walk, etc like adult

-3: Vasher recognised as special by humans

-4: Vasher taken away by elfs to be their new king.

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-25: Vasher returns to his ppl, he is basicly an elf but w/out pointy ears

-26: Vasher mad king of his ppl

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-500: ppl notise Vasher hasnt dyed in 500 yrs, jealous.

-501: ppl try to kill Vasher – he defeets them an flees, vowing to destroy all prejudis and evil

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-666: Vasher kills demon, saves village.

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-713: Vasher ganes staff/sword.

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-936: Vasher kills demon, saves village.

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-1111: Vasher ganes lantern.

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-1976: Vasher kills demon, saves village, ganes cross neklase.

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You get pictur.



Cant wate kthx!

Simply ... no.

I didn't read a thing past the massive picture and the age of 3000.

We have Rules and Settings for a reason. I think your best bet is to try another site. Check our Community and Links for other places to play.

Hahaha. What a joke.

Vasher_Lev wrote:Clothes: Long flowin robes flow down too feet and flow around arms flowingly, fall from collar in flowing brown folds

So, let me make sure I have this right -- you're saying that his robe flows down around his body? Because I'm not sure that using the word "flow" five times in the same sentence really makes that clear.

I'm sorry. I know I'm going to hell for saying that. But honestly, did this person even try?

There are some copyright issues, too. I liked My Name Is Asher Lev too, but really, even for a fan of Jewish literature, there's such a thing as take a tribute too far.

I think this is probably a joke post, as it violates so many rules.

Vasher_Lev wrote: all who see are amazed at the pur sight of this man.

Let me decide if I am amazed or not.

By the way, does anyone else think that too much care was taken to break EVERY SINGLE rule?

Just a little thought to share with you all.

Well heck, since everyone else is doing it...

One can only hope this is a joke. That, or someone who seriously just posted their pre-made profile.

When your picture takes up more than the entire page, you lose, bud.

Jenica Sabiny wrote:
One can only hope this is a joke. That, or someone who seriously just posted their pre-made profile.

When your picture takes up more than the entire page, you lose, bud.

OMG mabbe if you told me wat was wrong I could fix it!!! Im just tryin to be creative and tel a good story and calling it a "joke" and insultin it isnt gonna help me improove. And theres nothing in the rules about the pictur so w/e, I did read them. Mabbe you shoud be mor cleer.

And wat do you mean, pre-made? Wat do you mean, I "lose"? No loss if this place is just ppl who dont appresiate a good story.

Okay, so now that everyone is playing in this thread, I feel okay jumping in.

This is a joke. As in, a prank. Nobody misspells this many words. I have no doubts it's a fake. I could even venture a few guesses as to whose sense of humor this is, and if it is someone I know--a little more subtlety next time could've drawn a joke out longer, dude.

U guyz suk I just wanted to make a story to enjoy god ill make shure none of my frends ever come here

Well, just in case this isn't a joke, I'll tell you what was wrong here. (Always the nice one even if it makes me look like a jackass.) If I am killing someone's joke, HAHA, sucks to be you.

1-Grammar & spelling-For grammar, I'll use a direct example.
Soullfull black usualy but wen angry or otherly emotioned change color ie angry red sad blue etc. Correction: His eyes are usually a soulful black, but change colors with varying emotions; red when he's angry or blue when he's sad for example. As for spelling hit edit post, then click spell check. I dare you. You'll be there all day.

2-Copyright infringement- Yeah....Changing a letter in the name and adding a few details to the bio don't get you around the long cock of the law. (Sorry if that's too vulgar, but Superbad rules) I mean crap man, you might as well make a character name Nafuto and make him exactly like the character he's based on, BUT change the name of the village he's from. Yeah, that'd work right?

3-Fitting in to the setting-Yeah, he just doesn't fit.

4-Character design-Here, a direct excerpt from the rules "Be reasonable. Do not make your first character's age something silly like 1000 years old." Yeah....think you exceeded that.

5-No name for it really, but it's many things. You created an "all powerful" character and gave him amazing weapons. You didn't specify what his magical powers (healing for instance) can do. You used a lot of short forms of words. Lastly, seeing as how I'm not 100% sure if it's against the rules, you listed everything in a linear form.

There, explanation enough?

I'm sorry. I shouldn't have started this. I'm not a moderator, and it's not my place. In the future, when I can't bite my tongue, I'll PM someone instead of posting where I'm not supposed to.

It's okay Julen, everybody thought the same thing. I just ran away when I saw it. (^_^; )

Dude, if you were being serious and want to post here, you'll have to come back after you, quite frankly, take an English and/or typing class. If you want to tell a good story you have to be able to write enough so that we can understand you. Everyone will have trouble figuring out what you're trying to say if we accept you. I'm not even going to go into rule breaking since Drake did already...

Guys, guys. I'm pretty sure this is a joke post. Pagusel is right. The guy is either dyslexic or is joking around. Don't take it so serious like.